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My Wife
Jul 24, 2010 22:39:53 GMT -5
Post by FearingPix on Jul 24, 2010 22:39:53 GMT -5
let me know what you think. this was taken at the bop on the basin in huron. with my 50mm.
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Sara Adams
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Snapshot Happy TMP Studios
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My Wife
Jul 25, 2010 1:06:14 GMT -5
Post by Sara Adams on Jul 25, 2010 1:06:14 GMT -5
What was the ISO set at when you took this shot? It's quite a bit noisy, however it kind of works with the overall feel of the shot.
I really like the tones in this picture, everything is very vibrant and colorful. I think the colors really make the picture interesting. The composition is great and I love the little girl on the left side with the cup in her hand.
However, I wish Katie would show more expression, more personality -- more, her. She doesn't really stand out to me. She looks bored or sad or something. I'd love to see more personality in her overall expression and eyes. Try and tell a joke or be silly with her when you take pictures, just to get her to be more lively.
Overall I really like this shot, the only thing I would change is the overall feel (emotion wise). (:
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My Wife
Jul 25, 2010 8:40:46 GMT -5
Post by Thomas McKown on Jul 25, 2010 8:40:46 GMT -5
I see that you shot this at ISO 400, which shouldn't be that noisy. I guessing you had to correct the exposure in Photoshop? Any time you have to do this, try to remember to also use a little bit of noise reduction to smooth out some of the noise. Or you could always convert it to a black and white, those seem to work much better with noise than color, haha.
I agree with what Sara said. I really like the composition, the colors, the background blur, and the focus is right on. I think the shot would be a little better with some more emotion in it. She looks very depressed. If in fact she was depressed, you did do a good job of capturing it, haha. I know you tend to think outside the box, I can't tell if the emotionless expression was intentional or not.
Anyway, great work! You are using your equipment well. I like how you used the 50mm to isolate your subject and I like how you got up close and personal.
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My Wife
Jul 25, 2010 14:27:07 GMT -5
Post by FearingPix on Jul 25, 2010 14:27:07 GMT -5
this a little more expression? lol. i do have this one though .
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My Wife
Jul 25, 2010 21:55:59 GMT -5
Post by Thomas McKown on Jul 25, 2010 21:55:59 GMT -5
Nice! And the noise looks better as well! The colors really pop out, I like it.
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My Wife
Jul 26, 2010 7:39:31 GMT -5
Post by FearingPix on Jul 26, 2010 7:39:31 GMT -5
the last two i added more saturation and contrast.
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Sara Adams
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Snapshot Happy TMP Studios
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My Wife
Jul 26, 2010 15:54:26 GMT -5
Post by Sara Adams on Jul 26, 2010 15:54:26 GMT -5
Now that is what I'm talking about! Real cute, I love them. (:
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My Wife
Jul 26, 2010 20:58:52 GMT -5
Post by FearingPix on Jul 26, 2010 20:58:52 GMT -5
thank you
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